Broadjam Artist: Kelvin Benion
Song: Head Bopper
Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Roy Hamilton (Songwriter and Producer)
Pro General Comments: I like where you're going with this track but I feel it needs some work. The drum sound selection and mix of the drums need an upgrade. I'd also recommend adding a few other unusual sound FX every so often just to give the listener some ear candy like a Timbaland track. I can hear a rapper like Florida or Pitbull or someone on this too with maybe a female singing on the hook. I've noticed for tv/film, music supervisors like to have both a song and instrumental version so maybe think about working on that! All of the breaks and overall arrangement are solid and I like the transitions. At times i feel like there is a lot going on at the same time so maybe a few breaks would be a good idea too just to change it up.I'd be more than happy to further develop with track with you and Im open to hear some of your other work as well. I like where you're going with this track but I feel it needs some work. The drum sound selection and mix of the drums need an upgrade. I'd also recommend adding a few other unusual sound FX every so often just to give the listener some ear candy like a Timbaland track. I can hear a rapper like Florida or Pitbull or someone on this too with maybe a female singing on the hook. I've noticed for tv/film, music supervisors like to have both a song and instrumental version so maybe think about working on that! All of the breaks and overall arrangement are solid and I like the transitions. At times i feel like there is a lot going on at the same time so maybe a few breaks would be a good idea too just to change it up.I'd be more than happy to further develop with track with you and Im open to hear some of your other work as well.
Quote From Pro: Continue to develop your sound, you're on the right track!