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Broadjam Artist:<\/b> Michael Kawka<\/a> Broadjam Artist: Michael KawkaSong: LegacyBroadjam Pro Reviewer: Diana Williamson (Songwriter, Music Supervisor)Pro General Comments: FYI -I don’t comment on instrumentation as my expertise lies in overall vision, marketability, lyrics, hooks, etc..Goo…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-27810","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/27810","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=27810"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/27810\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":27811,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/27810\/revisions\/27811"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=27810"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=27810"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=27810"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
Song:<\/b> Legacy<\/a>
Broadjam Pro Reviewer: <\/b>
Diana Williamson<\/a><\/b> (Songwriter, Music Supervisor)
Pro General Comments:<\/b> FYI -I don't comment on instrumentation as my expertise lies in overall vision, marketability, lyrics, hooks, etc..Good melodic opening, mysterious, you lead your listener into the song. Vocal has a lot of empathy, character and really helps to sell it. Always a good idea to have such a universal title\/hook which can help make it fit into a variety of media uses. Your arrangement sense is very tasteful and effective and supports the song. Pre chorus is dynamic and intense but could possibly build a bit more melodically to the chorus. The chorus is great but could really soar with just a bit more melodic build, if you really want to maximize your hook. It may not need a lot. The ear seems to want to have something extra underneath.Lyric starts off with an interesting idea. Rhyme scheme works well in your hook like it should. You have a good use of rhyme. You might want to steer concept towards the idea of a positive legacy- in a few choice words, which you seem to do- but if you emphasized this a bit more- it may be a more easy sell. (FYI-It's very helpful to post your lyric - when asking for a critique...) \"In silence we dream of what we could be\"- perhaps a more visual word than silence would paint the picture more. (in darkness? Etc..) \"Your footprints, impressions left behind\"- good use of visual lyrics.
Quote From Pro:<\/b> Anthem-like, melodic track has a heroic, mysterious feel.<\/p>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"