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Broadjam Artist:<\/b> Sergio Simone<\/a> Broadjam Artist: Sergio SimoneSong: Take My AdviceBroadjam Pro Reviewer: Diana Williamson (Songwriter, Music Supervisor)Pro General Comments: Dear Sergio from Kleinburg- ha ha- where is the contact button on your site- to contact you direct? Try email…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-23313","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/23313","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=23313"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/23313\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":23314,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/23313\/revisions\/23314"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=23313"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=23313"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviewspro.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=23313"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
Song:<\/b> Take My Advice<\/a>
Broadjam Pro Reviewer: <\/b>
Diana Williamson<\/a><\/b> (Songwriter, Music Supervisor)
Pro General Comments:<\/b> Dear Sergio from Kleinburg- ha ha- where is the contact button on your site- to contact you direct? Try emailing me again- it's been very hectic and I can't seem to find it.As usual- Please be advised that I don't comment on individual instrumentation as my forte is more in the overall picture- lyrics, melody, arrangements and marketing.The word appalling sounds like a convenient rhyme- songs usually do best with everyday speech- not something that feels tacked on. Some of the lyrics here have a feel that they are mostly too easy rhymes- \"quick as a flash\/make a mad dash\"- appalling\/calling, what she's like, took a hike. You want to use phrases that you would use when talking to a friend- more or less- so they have that natural flow to them. Be careful of this. For eg \"give her the news\" isn't something you would really say to a friend.Vocal sounds a bit sing song-ey- versus the subject matter which could be a bit more angst ridden concerning the topic. This singer isn't selling me this song. I am too aware of his vocal instead of what he's saying. You might want to look for a richer bluesy voice- one that has more color. You don't have to be too clever in a blues song- sometimes its just about the singer - saying he's hurting- is enough. But that voice has to draw us in immediately. Maybe study some Robert Cray for ideas?- he deals with those subjects but also has a catchiness to his work that some blues don't always have. Eg- https:\/\/youtu.be\/2gQEDwjhaDE?list=PLUmnnNR3rRsR2vdw9b765Jow6ZgICtqL-
Quote From Pro:<\/b> Sergio Simone's songs tell stories from the heart.<\/p>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"