Broadjam Artist: Wilson Flores
Song: The Sky is Falling
Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Robert Dellaposta (Writer, A&R, Publisher)
Pro General Comments: Wilson,Pretty much everyone who is over 50 knows about Chicken Little and the sky is falling but the problem is very few young people will know this reference. That might not be important but it's my job to point it out. The sound of your kick drum is weak and not up to par with what's out there now. Google your genre and compare the sounds. The same with your bass. I like the line the bass is playing but the sound isn't working for me. Try other sounds for a bass and kick drum that are more in line with today's pop electro. Always include a lyric sheet so the evaluator can comment on the rhyme scheme etc. The meter sounded good and the phrasing sounded good but I'd have to listen multiple times to make out what you were singing...I did like the sound of the keyboard synth but it was a little retro...Your singing could be enhanced with a vocalizer or pitch control...there were absolutely no effects on your vocal at all that I could hear...my best advice is try as many options as you can till you find the sounds and effects that give your song the best chance of success. This song needs more work in my opinion to be competitive and commercial.
Quote From Pro: Wilson Flores is combining the retro electro sounds of house EDM and techno with todays lyrics.