Broadjam Artist: Steven McDonald
Song: I've Got My Savior
Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Tom Worth (Songwriter, Producer, Pro Songwriting Coach)
Pro General Comments: **Please refer to this more than checkmarks above**Wow this is a wonderful song and recording! Great work! I'm not surprised that you were able to get radio play. It's not common to have the solo before 2nd chorus, but it totally works here. In fact I love how the solo flows into the 2nd chorus musically. Cool production pause at beginning of last verse. Singer (I'm guessing you) is AWESEOME.There are a couple lyrical things that I believe could be strongerCh: 2nd line. It seems like a forced rhyme to me. If you were having a conversation you wouldn't say this, you'd say something more like "what was done to him was he was placed on a cross." This is not a huge thing, but could be improved.Verse 3: I would prefer if you kept the same pattern of the other verses here where you say "I've got my Savior" before "when things come undone." I know that wouldn't make any sense lol, but I would adjust lyrics so you can keep that same pattern.These lyrical things aren't what I'd call deal breakers. If you have your own studio and could simply fix those parts and remix, I'd do it. But if you'd have to pay for a lot of studio time, it may not be worth it. Your call really.
Quote From Pro: A radio ready song. Bravo.
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