Broadjam Artist: LOVE by Dave Peeler
Song: Love
Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Jeseka Price (Publisher, Producer)
Pro General Comments: I Love, Love, Love this song and its melody specifically.I find it to be very therapeutic, serene, and calming while positive at the same time! Also, I am a big fan of your songwriting, and the vocalist used! She is very good as well- However, I do find the chorus or hook to be aesthetically nice, yet something feels like it's missing due to the consistent repetition placed on the word "Love" x4 or 5 in the chorus. On a brighter note, at the same time that is also what holds the melody that I love so much....and maybe that is the point, right?!? Very creative, anyhow love this song! The last thing I will say about your lovely song is maybe changing the tempo slightly, or even notes (they could go an octave higher or lower), even bringing in a second vocalist like a deep southern country baritone vocalist on the 2nd and 4th or 3rd and 4th verses like a Scott McCreery or Toby Keith as a collaborative effort, just swap out some of the lines to match. Then, I really think that could be something tough on the Blues and Country tip! Also, you have now gained a big fan "myself" with respect to your songwriting. I love what you have executed here Dave, so please Keep up the great work, and don't stop your amazing skill and talent for songwriting!So, thanks again for submitting your song, and patience during these crazy times, btw! Happy to hear and review it! Let's keep in touch and I look forward to hearing more from you :)Thank you,Jeseka PricePrice Royalty Publishing
Quote From Pro: The last thing I will say about your song is that it is definitely perfect for "Newlyweds" and my only thought is to maybe change up the tempo slightly by way of notes (they could go an octave higher or lower), even bringing in a second vocalist like a deep southern country baritone vocalist on the 2nd and 4th or 3rd and 4th verses like a Scott McCreery or Toby Keith as a collaborative effort, just swap out some of the lines to match. I really think that could be something tough on the Blues and Country tip! Also, you have now gained a big fan "myself" with respect to your songwriting. I love what you have executed here Dave, so please Keep up the great work, and don't stop your amazing skill and talent for songwriting!
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