Broadjam Artist: LC Wells
Song: Something's Wrong With America
Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Jeseka Price (Publisher, Producer)
Pro General Comments: I really love the song and the overall meaning behind it! I think the title is very appropriate or you could change it to What's Wrong With America if you wanted to, but clearly, you have a great title and don't need to do a thing to it! Excellent job!! Also, I really liked the songwriting, but there were some parts I felt may not be needed as much. For Example, I personally wasn't a fan of the intro, because to me it felt a bit too long and a little too chanty or something but I can't put my finger on why it didn't grab me right away, I personally just feel like nowadays peoples attention span is extremely short, songs are shorter than they used to be, along with the fact Artists you hardly see them putting out a full 16 track album, so It concerns me with the long intro for the reason of someone possibly pressing the next button without giving the song a fair shot or chance like it deserves! I am extremely passionate about music clearly, and opinions of course are just as some ppl say they....everyone has an opinion but that doesn't make it right or wrong as you know- so please don't take it to any offense. I just want to make sure your song has the best chance and I give it my fair, honest review with respect to the music in general. However, I really did love and enjoy the overall song and melody again it is really catchy and has the Aretha / Rock & The activist feeling to it, very well done! I think this song has great potential if you change just a few things I mentioned or not, but oh last thing! I loveeeeeed the electric guitar solo, that rocked, maybe just cut the song short by a min at 4min vs 5!
Quote From Pro: However, I really did love and enjoy the overall song and melody again it is really catchy and has the Aretha / Rock & The activist feeling to it, very well done! I think this song has great potential if you change just a few things I mentioned or not, but oh last thing! I loveeeeeed the electric guitar solo, that rocked, maybe just cut the song short by a min at 4min vs 5!