Broadjam Artist: Bill Wren Music
Song: The Beginning
Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Diana Williamson (Songwriter, Music Supervisor)
Pro General Comments: Please note: I don't comment on quality of individual instrumentation as my expertise delves more into overall performance, marketing, melody, etc. The title fits the song, it does sound like a beginning. Perhaps you could flavour up the title- "New Beginning," "At Last" or another descriptive word or phrase- to make it "pop" if you are pitching to music supervisors, just a suggestion. It's good to stand out from the crowd on a music supervisor's desk, whether with an interesting title, arresting artwork, etc. You build a lot of emotion into this song and it moves the listener. It feels like a musical journey you are taking us on which is good. You might want to think about having additional recurring hooks in your instrumentals - the ear naturally searches for some kind of hook and it feels like this could only enhance the song. It is never boring, a songwriter sin if there ever was one. So keep up the good work!
Quote From Pro: Bill Wren creates a unique soundscape full of soaring emotion with a transformative feel.