He’s Got A Flame Jessa by SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABSSong: He’s Got A Flame JessaBroadjam Pro Reviewer: Elizabeth Elkins (Songwriter)Pro General Comments: This is the weakest song of the three you submitted. It’s a bit cliche in its musical approach and the vocalist is…

SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: He's Got A Flame Jessa

Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Elizabeth Elkins (Songwriter)

Pro General Comments: This is the weakest song of the three you submitted. It's a bit cliche in its musical approach and the vocalist is still missing a real emotional engagement to make the lyric and performance memorable. You may want to bring the tempo back just a little to let her really nail this take. It just feels forced as is to me right now. Again, I love that you do fun, tempo songs because those translate live into a good time for the audience. The instruments sound great overall. The mix is close but no cigar, as the vocal needs to sit in it a bit more comfortably. Lyrically this one is a bit awkward, and I wonder if there is a stronger title or clearer way to the hook. The other two songs were crystal clear, strong hooks that left nothing to guess. This one is more uncertain. I think you guys are on to a cool song with a lot of promise, just continue to focus on the clearest, most memorable hooks and really getting the best vocal takes possible since bluegrass demands vocal excellence.

Quote From Pro: Dance-able and fun bluegrass tune that harkens back to some of the tongue-and-cheek vocals of early Dixie Chicks.

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