Craziest Woman by Alan Lee Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Alan Lee CarpenterSong: Craziest WomanBroadjam Pro Reviewer: Elizabeth Elkins (Songwriter)Pro General Comments: The recording and vocal performance on this song is very compelling. You’ve got a very interesting vocal presence and this …

Alan Lee Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Alan Lee Carpenter
Song: Craziest Woman

Broadjam Pro Reviewer:
Elizabeth Elkins (Songwriter)

Pro General Comments: The recording and vocal performance on this song is very compelling. You've got a very interesting vocal presence and this song really does it justice. I'm also a huge fan of the melodies across the board here. The shift between chorus and verse melody is superb. Great work. Once again, my main concern is with the lyrics. At times, the simplicity is cool - like the repetition of the chorus hook. It feels like both an insult and a sincere love statement, which is hard to accomplish (thank your awesome melody for that). But lines like "Take walks in the park and feed the birds, think of your smiles and I can hear your words" make me cringe. I think you can beat that, and make it much more compelling for the listener to get lost in. You've got a lot of cool elements happening here, and I'm a fan. Just focus on making your storylines and lyrics as unique as you can as you develop your writer voice.

Quote From Pro: Weirdly cool and original, Alan Lee Carpenter lets go of love with this laid-back break-up tune.

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